JAG UAR 11:26, 17 March 2017 (UTC) "stated that it was something Studio Liverpool had done before" - are you able to specify what title they did it with before? That would be interesting. JAG UAR 11:26, 17 March 2017 (UTC) "(formerly known as Psygnosis)" - does this need to be in brackets? I think ti would be better as standard prose. I've never seen the DLC mentioned outside the gameplay section? I think it's more relevant to gameplay as the development and release subsections strictly talks about the game's design etc.
JAG UAR 11:26, 17 March 2017 (UTC) "The game also featured downloadable content (DLC) namely the HD/Fury DLC," - this would seem better placed along with 'release' info, rather than in the gameplay section. JAG UAR 11:26, 17 March 2017 (UTC) "It is set in the near future" - this seems redundant as two sentences later the actual years it is set in are specified.
Is it reasonably well written? "however its long loading times and minor technical issues were criticised" - think this would be better as "however its long loading times were criticized, as were some minor technical issues"Ĭhanged.The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. This review is transcluded from Talk:Wipeout 2048/GA1. Guild of Copy Editors Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors Template:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors Guild of Copy Editors articles This article was copy edited by Miniapolis, a member of the Guild of Copy Editors, on 18 March 2017. This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale. This article has been rated as FA-Class on the project's quality scale. Electronic music Wikipedia:WikiProject Electronic music Template:WikiProject Electronic music electronic music articles If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks. This article is within the scope of WikiProject Electronic music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Electronic music on Wikipedia.
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